Junhwan Park
Sonnet
In the spring of March when the flowers bloomed,
You and I were first met at the old school
I saw you and there was no time to be gloomed
I just stared at her my body got dull
Your smile always made my day
Wanted your laughter as my ringtone
Couldn't stop thinking of you mayday!
I think of you and I having ice cream cone
Wanted your laughter as my ringtone
Couldn't stop thinking of you mayday!
I think of you and I having ice cream cone
I went up to you and wanted to talk
I couldn't cause ' my heart was thumping
Just being with her mad me fly like a hawk
Couldn't hear anything my minds bumping
It is the new start with this girl
Wish me luck so i can give her a pearl
No specific meter
ReplyDeleteschool and dull doesn't rhyme
take out the space between stanza 3
&& good job in connecting with the theme, relationship