Sunday, January 23, 2011

Free verse poem

Friends are always beside me
They are like robots
sometimes they act like my parents
brothers or even my enemies

We share joy
The photos are smiling with memories
Reminding  our past
holding our hands together as tightly as my shoelaces

We used to like playgrounds
Playgrounds were our cafe
We shared our delicious cookies
made by sand and some unsaturated water

The seesaws were our favorite
Seesaw always complained with my weight
My friends used to laugh
I was embarrassed like a new student at a school

We used to fight over Pokemon cards
Whenever I was angry like a cow in rodeo,
My friend used to hand me a card
He was an angel fallen from a sky

Time flew like an airplane in the sky
I miss my friends from  past
My new friends are filling the  space
but it just doesn't feel the same 

1 comment:

  1. comparing friends to robots?;;
    word choice: unsaturated water..? try something else
    i like the last stanza, it concludes the poem really well:)

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